tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1837404865043604932.post1417121409369218170..comments2023-06-21T08:01:18.457-04:00Comments on Hobbley Hilltop: Something I wrote, many, many years ago.Sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13031294858454742239noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1837404865043604932.post-839772292794747762008-08-03T20:59:37.100-04:002008-08-03T20:59:37.100-04:00All right, then what??? Are you going to finish t...All right, then what??? Are you going to finish the story, or what??Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1837404865043604932.post-53169357185523987932008-08-04T19:27:31.811-04:002008-08-04T19:27:31.811-04:00In the words of Mermaid-Man... EEEEEVVVVIIIIILLLLL...In the words of Mermaid-Man... <i>EEEEEVVVVIIIIILLLLL!!!!!</i><br><br>If I was editing it, I would fix some of the very long sentences at the start, adding a comma here and there. Otherwise, it's really good.<br><br>So, when do we get the rest of the story?? ;)Adeenahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12369322603162326469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1837404865043604932.post-83058703913917865422008-08-04T20:07:49.042-04:002008-08-04T20:07:49.042-04:00Yeah, the long sentences get kinda crazy but that ...Yeah, the long sentences get kinda crazy but that was how I used to write back in the day when I was younger and had a computer up in my room that I would write on in order to hone my fine fine writing skilz.<br><br>:DSarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13031294858454742239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1837404865043604932.post-39517968666753173002008-08-15T22:28:28.458-04:002008-08-15T22:28:28.458-04:00Sarah, you should be an author. Your writing is C...Sarah, you should be an author. Your writing is CRAZY! Seriously, do it. Sell Avon on the side to make money between publishings.:)Heathernoreply@blogger.com